Not even similar to that PSD i gave you -.-
Mmm , dont use that kind of C4Ds try to use Mechanicla C4Ds always because thats what i do i don't use flow-styled C4Ds because they ruin the view allot .
i like Allen Walker's render because am a fan if that character but still try to make his hands shiny and appeared more than the rest of his body and the same for his left eye.
About the text try to not use one because the text usually don't works with the flow .. thats all KIU