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Pharaoh Atem Royal Guard
Age : 28 Posts : 69 KCVDS username: : TheMightyPharaoh Location : EGYPT
| Subject: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Mon Mar 28, 2011 3:40 pm | |
| Instead of spamming this section with thousands of topic for single works, everyone post his latest works here.We got simple rules:1- You must rate the latest two works at least before posting our latest works. 2- You can't add more than two pics per post.3- When you rate a work please be accurate in ur rating not just saying x/10 and run!!4- Large pics can be posted as links, so the page won't be so heavy!I will start with this: | |
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Anzo Administrator
Age : 32 Posts : 396 KCVDS username: : Yugi Muto Location : Syria
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Mon Mar 28, 2011 4:43 pm | |
| i prefer the new way witch is each member open his own gallery , that way works will be more organized .. Also i like spamming >.> | |
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Pharaoh Atem Royal Guard
Age : 28 Posts : 69 KCVDS username: : TheMightyPharaoh Location : EGYPT
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Mon Mar 28, 2011 5:33 pm | |
| My point is to save time dude so I don't need to open many topics. However, if you don't like it, close this. | |
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Anzo Administrator
Age : 32 Posts : 396 KCVDS username: : Yugi Muto Location : Syria
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Mon Mar 28, 2011 6:16 pm | |
| Well its up to members , people can post here or they can open their own gallery as long as then don't post the same artwork twice in both topics ... | |
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Darkneji12 Royal Guard
Posts : 112 KCVDS username: : darkneji12
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Mon Mar 28, 2011 10:54 pm | |
| i like the idea of both ._. now shhhhh ._. pharo: sig is awesome but not a fan of c4ds on screen new for a sig of the week thing and this i was doing a blind imitation ._. too much topaz for the win | |
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BERKAY Royal Guard
Posts : 239 KCVDS username: : ...
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Tue Mar 29, 2011 7:11 pm | |
| Darkneji12: First one's text is so far from focal point and if you replace it as near to focal, then there is a huge empty part at right. In conclusion, you placed your render/stock wrong. For second one, you should low topaz filter's opacity. It also need a edit about light. Your light comes from her back but she is very shiny. :/ | |
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Darkneji12 Royal Guard
Posts : 112 KCVDS username: : darkneji12
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Tue Mar 29, 2011 11:24 pm | |
| eh berkay the lugia one was i found from a diff sig that was almost the same just without topaz or the c4ds behind it. and my miku sig... was trying to copy atticus just go get a little better o ya tried again this time more successful oh and a simple sig i made... plz dont say its simple ._. | |
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Anzo Administrator
Age : 32 Posts : 396 KCVDS username: : Yugi Muto Location : Syria
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Wed Mar 30, 2011 5:41 pm | |
| Someone PM me with this Topaz thingy -.- | |
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BERKAY Royal Guard
Posts : 239 KCVDS username: : ...
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Wed Mar 30, 2011 6:11 pm | |
| Yes it's better Neji. For second, you know what I'll say. Yugi, it wastes your time a little. I tried once to use. :/ | |
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Darkneji12 Royal Guard
Posts : 112 KCVDS username: : darkneji12
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Wed Mar 30, 2011 10:48 pm | |
| ^lol if yugi gets a pm from me its a youtube vid XD yugi u dont rly need it... it screws up with sharpens alot | |
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Darkness Lord Member
Age : 30 Posts : 58 KCVDS username: : Darkness Lord Location : Egypt
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Thu Mar 31, 2011 3:05 am | |
| Your pic is sexy Neji. Ofc its better than the first one. I just think that the face is a bit more bright than needed near the nose and under the eyes. I think u should just reduce that a little bit maybe (I guess the naturality and the balance of the effects will still be cool). The bright on the hair looks so cool. . Oh and ur simple sig is cool too. You just love that brighty look The first sig for the nub GFXer DL. Well tried to use 1 C4D (duplicated many times) and 1 Stock Background. I depended on the Adjustments layers and some Sharpening. I also brought a Topaz Plug-in and I had no idea about how to use it actually. So I played around with it on the pic (uselessly) till I read a guide or something like that. Here is it:- This is V2 after playing around with the topaz A bit bright and sharp? meh I guess yeah. | |
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Pharaoh Atem Royal Guard
Age : 28 Posts : 69 KCVDS username: : TheMightyPharaoh Location : EGYPT
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Thu Mar 31, 2011 9:03 am | |
| I don't see any difference between the two versions but your work is very sharpened and crowded in the right side!! It's not bad still! | |
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Darkness Lord Member
Age : 30 Posts : 58 KCVDS username: : Darkness Lord Location : Egypt
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Thu Mar 31, 2011 9:51 am | |
| Well there is a slight difference in the sharpening level and the colors on the both sides. Hmmmmm, lets try this again. I tried to edit it a bit. Still too sharp? | |
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Anzo Administrator
Age : 32 Posts : 396 KCVDS username: : Yugi Muto Location : Syria
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Thu Mar 31, 2011 2:55 pm | |
| I wants that topaz thingy | |
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Darkness Lord Member
Age : 30 Posts : 58 KCVDS username: : Darkness Lord Location : Egypt
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Thu Mar 31, 2011 6:02 pm | |
| I'll upload mine for ya and PM you with a link | |
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BERKAY Royal Guard
Posts : 239 KCVDS username: : ...
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Fri Apr 01, 2011 3:07 pm | |
| Darkness Lord: Stay without topaz, please! You should change font and replace text. I can't read it easily. @Pharaoh Atem, look at render's leg. Latest:Yugi, I followed your 53 psd. | |
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BERKAY Royal Guard
Posts : 239 KCVDS username: : ...
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Sat Apr 02, 2011 7:51 pm | |
| Thank you so much for comments. Latest: | |
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Pharaoh Atem Royal Guard
Age : 28 Posts : 69 KCVDS username: : TheMightyPharaoh Location : EGYPT
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Sat Apr 02, 2011 9:50 pm | |
| Berkay, I commented in KC! Latest was trying to follow Yugi's PSD | |
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BERKAY Royal Guard
Posts : 239 KCVDS username: : ...
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Sun Apr 03, 2011 10:13 pm | |
| I can't se Atem's body. :S Also you messed with something like view quality. | |
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Anzo Administrator
Age : 32 Posts : 396 KCVDS username: : Yugi Muto Location : Syria
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Mon Apr 04, 2011 12:32 pm | |
| Less C4Ds and more light , also try to use orange photo filter
P.S : i didnt comment in ze past 3 days cuz i was busy with an essay for my college xD sry | |
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Pharaoh Atem Royal Guard
Age : 28 Posts : 69 KCVDS username: : TheMightyPharaoh Location : EGYPT
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Mon Apr 04, 2011 5:52 pm | |
| I already adjusted the light so it looks fine, however, for the c4d issue I don't think I can do anything because it's just one! Thanks for the advice though. | |
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Darkneji12 Royal Guard
Posts : 112 KCVDS username: : darkneji12
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Wed Apr 06, 2011 1:59 am | |
| btw ima make this a sticky just so it doesnt get lost o.o atem: lower ur gradients ._. and use some abstract or bio c4ds also ur lighting could use work meh news v1 v2 and a diff all of this is lighting practice ._. | |
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Darkness Lord Member
Age : 30 Posts : 58 KCVDS username: : Darkness Lord Location : Egypt
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Thu Apr 07, 2011 12:00 am | |
| Well just some few things to say about the 3 designs: For the first, I guess V2 is better cause the face of the render looks better. Hmms maybe some more brightness ? For the second, I can think of some brighty look on the wings. You know, something like duplicating the render, Guassian Blur and setting the Blend Mode to Screen with Opacity like 30% or so. Then Use some lighting effects to give it the dark look again. I guess that basicly can give u a shiny wings. As u made them for practicing on Lighting, I dont really have to talk about the BG or the C4Ds. Cool works though Hmms my last design. Tried to do as Yugi said. Well I sharpenned it a bit. | |
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Darkneji12 Royal Guard
Posts : 112 KCVDS username: : darkneji12
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Thu Apr 07, 2011 1:29 pm | |
| ^i tried something like that actually, it just blocked off the 2 orbs that the light was coming from :/ and i also found that nobody uses a soft brush for lighting anymore o.o its now just burn tool and dodge so i made this as my last sig with soft brushes :/ here was just messing around with brushes lol and another xD no topaz and also yeah i added a few more gradients and burned a bit more ._. | |
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BERKAY Royal Guard
Posts : 239 KCVDS username: : ...
| Subject: Re: Show The Graphic Artworks You Make #1 Thu Apr 07, 2011 8:43 pm | |
| Darkness Lord: Use more adjustment settings and get some depth. Also try to improve yourself about dodge, blur and burn. They will help you make a good focal point. Darkneji12: First version is the best! Latest: | |
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